This narrative assignment was much harder than the last. My narrative was never where I wanted it to be in cohesiveness because my narrative would not have made sense without talking about different portions of the same event cycle. This essay involved narrative plus background music and that in and of itself was much more difficult. Before it was just recording our voice reading what we had written, this time we not only had to record but we had to choose music that fit the mood of the narrative, choose where the music should fade in and out and pause to create emphasis. It was a lot of different concepts being mixed together and it required a lot of attention. Personally, I struggled with my narrative due to the way it was organized and keeping everything concise and making sure nothing was too drawn out. Revising my draft, I would pay more attention to the areas I felt were not as concise in the beginning even if it takes me over word limit. There are some areas that might be able to be cut and others that can be extended to make more sense. A good sound story seems to take into consideration of music placement, where it stops and creates emphasis and such. With mine, I didnt put music through the middle portion because I felt it important to emphasize but now that I look back on my own draft compared to others drafts, I have areas in mine where music stops could emphasize certain parts more than having music start or stop there. I did really enjoy this project considering the tough time I had with it. Choosing the music was extremely fun. I liked being able to score my own work and make sure the songs fit the mood I was going for.
Documentary Pitch
This pitch is more of a proof of concept than anything else, but I think it would be fun. I asked Bruce whether or not a 'mockumentary' was a valid interpretation of this assignment, to which the response was a semi-enthusiastic "pitch it!" So here is the pitch. A parody of the audio series 'Serial', the investigation into the murder of a teenage girl that went viral a few years ago. Uncreatively, the title of this parody would be 'Cereal' and it would chronical the investigation into who ate my box of Strawberry Honey Bunches of Oats. I would 'interview' my family and friends with a ridiculous amount of production and decoration, acting like I was trying to get to the bottom of a murder, but in reality just trying to find out who ate my damn cereal. This may be too narrative-y, but the climax I image would be a removal of the façade and me attacking my little brother for eating my cereal. Trust me, it's really funny in my he...
Hi Anne,
ReplyDeleteCould you say more about what you mean when you write that your "narrative was never where I wanted it to be in cohesiveness because my narrative would not have made sense without talking about different portions of the same event cycle?"
Spit-balling off of this: do you think there is any chance that the reason you felt a need to explain something else in the event cycle is because that was the story that really wanted to be told?
DeleteI agree with you that the music added more time to our projects, but we are learning so much. I wish you luck on the final revision.
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